Last Step

[Fliptastic29]

Emptiness falls away for the time,
Fulfillment with what lay ahead,
An enjoyment of what is now,
I bow my head.
To what and to where and to when,
Questions unanswered by the night,
Do you have the answer,
bright lights in the sky?
Perhaps we will only know when we choose let go

[sarafina mable]

i like the last line of this, although if its representing death it might be a little to sinical for this piece. i'm thinking more along the lines of letting go of worries, weights, anger--stuff like that.

i know this part is a pivital question in the piece,
"Questions unanswered by the night,
Do you have the answer,
bright lights in the sky?"

but somehow the use of "bright lights in the sky" seems kind of over done. i think you could fill the same purpose by rewording this to only reflect what you're really asking.